dsheinem wrote:indecks wrote:
My issue was that you were saying you just couldn't stomach any more of that crazy ups-and-downs Potterverse
I never said this. I explained that they felt convoluted because plot points seemed artificially shoehorned in to extend the length of the series. I granted that maybe this was the fault of the films, and not the books.
I certainly could follow the Potter films fine and understood it. I just understood it to be convoluted and - perhaps a better word - overly-contrived.
Well, it was a book (series). A planned series, so I guess you could say it was contrived. She sort of had to plan what she was going to do, otherwise it would have ended up like my attempt at book. I.E. never finished, and pretty shitty.
I dont see what was shoehorned though.
Harry's 11. Finds out hes a wizard.
Goes to school for the first year, almost killed by Voldemort.
Goes to school a 2nd time, finds out he can speak to snakes like Voldy. Almost gets murdered by Voldy's memory.
Goes to school a 3rd time, thinks hes gonna be murdered by a guy who supposedly followed Voldy, turns out the guy is his godfather and was framed.
Goes to school the 4th year, and is set up to win a rigged set of contests so Voldy can get him alone and use his blood to be revived and kill him too, but fails killing him.
Year 5, Voldy orchestrates a smear campain against Harry so he can secrety overtake the Magical Government from the inside.
Year 6: Voldy succeeds in taking over from the inside, and uses his inside man to try and kill harry, but also Dumbledore, and succeeds in killing Dumbledore - while this is happening, an explanation for the memory in Movie/book/Year 2 is presented which:
Year 7 - explains why Voldemort wasn't killed, and still around in some form until book 4. The final battle happens, the hero triumphs and everyone is happy.
I dont see how that's convoluted. Planned, sure. Overly planned, sure. Maybe she wanted to be really detailed and create a living breathing universe, which she succeeds at. The argument could be made that shes not a great
writer, but neithe was Tolkien (gasp). But he created a great universe that influenced fantasy forever.