My first attempt at a review.

[newt42]

I'll be honest - I was put off by the opening text:

"This is an amateur review of, Croc Legend of the Gobbos"

- It is grammatically incorrect (no need for a comma)
- It suggests that the review might not be very good (only "amateur")

I did persevere past this and found a decent review - I'd echo much of what was said above. But you must do something about the intro - it sets the wrong tone entirely.

Also, at the end you repeat yourself a few times in the short "worth buying?" segment. I think that you would do best to leave yourself off camera and focus only on game footage instead. Nothing against you, but it works best when the attention is on the game.

Also 7 out of 10 is usually represented as 7/10, not 7-10.

Alright. Also, about the title, is the grammar thing all that needs fixed, or does something have to happen to the seizure-inducing part of it?