Severe Quake Condition

[NathanBarnatt]

Monroe Salby suffers from SQC

[ott0bot]

I think you're creating a new dance move.

But I think this would be more funny if it was edited down quite a bit. It goes on too long and the joke wears off. The headphones one at the end is pretty funny though. I kinda felt the same about the suprised brain syndrome skits. They could be really funny in small doses. Three or four of the best scenes would be great.

You're doing alot of stuff which is good. You can go back in a few months and see what really works and what needs to get cut. I think comedy is mostly trail and error, and at least you got some evidence kid.

[aaron]

yeah, kinda lengthy.

i honestly thought this was going to be about the game quake, though.

[NathanBarnatt]

Yea I guess now I can see a few that could come out. I spent a day watching it over and over cutting things out and trimming it down. I figured since it was under 3 minutes that I'd leave it at that. I just love watching people fall down, it's hard for me to go and make a 2 hour feature of a guy falling and smashing into stuff.

[General Chaos]

I actually think this is one of your better ones. Well done.

[NathanBarnatt]

Thanks man!

[aaron]

a 2 hour feature of a guy falling and smashing into stuff.

now that would be fucking hilarious. no lines, no exposition.