For what it's worth, I read your entire post. I took English as one of my majors, and the cardinal rule of writing is to know your audience's expectations. Obviously, a post on an internet forum --even one as intelligent as Racketboy -- does not require a thesis statement, supporting paragraphs, and a conclusion. Keep your sentences punchy!Original_Name wrote:Sorry about the length, guys. I'm an English Writing Major, so it can be kind of difficult to go back to more relaxed styles of writing. That probably shows in the way I tend to write on these boards. I'll try and trim it down a bit -- it's an interesting topic, I'd like to make it easier for discussion on the actual subject matter to take place instead of just how verbose I can be.
I agree with how humans have an innate desire to create things in their image. The best example of this is how people created god in their own image.
More to the point regarding virtual pets though, the strongest emotional connection I've ever felt to a video game character is in Pokemon Red/Blue (I shit you not). I felt responsible for the well-being of my pokemon team -- leveling them, teaching them moves, taking them to the Pokecenter when they were hurt. It cut into me when my Charmander fainted in the Viridian Forest because I was pushing it too hard to level up for Brock, thinking I could get in just one last fight before retreating to the Poke-center.
