New Video Game Site Launched

[terrybogard]

Great site, I'll be checking it for updates. Be sure to check out my not-so-great import-laden blog.

cool site ill def check it out frequently.... thanks man!

[hashiriya1]

cave shmups.

I got 'em all. Lemme know if you need some input.

[terrybogard]

cave shmups.

I got 'em all. Lemme know if you need some input.

im not sure what kinda graphics i can use of cave artwork on the site design... but whatever you got would be cool....

[Para]

Why are there so many ellipses?

I was going to say exactly the same thing. I like the overall design of the website and the articles themselves aren't bad, but as stated there are way too many ellipses. 99% of the time you can get away with just ending the sentence with a single period rather than an ellipsis.

I am far for a writer and I don't claim to be a good one but I would suggest just avoiding using them altogether unless it is actually necessary

I know this has been discussed already but I wanted to bring it up as well since the articles are the most important aspect of a website like yours.
Keep up the good work though.

[Breetai]

Hey, cool!!!!!!!!!



Car Marty? WOW

Finally, you need to rid of all the ellipsis. Others seem to agree. As a rule, completely avoid them on your site. Ellipsis are for quoting things in essays when you leave out a phrase/words, comics, and playing around on forums like this one. I DO look forward to reading more of it. Also, take up Hashiriya's advice and read his blog to. It's a great read!