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Hey guys! So I posted here quite a while ago with some pretty lame 12 second videos...
Well, I got some shit for it..reasonably so! I took y'alls advice and made a new review over Aidyn Chronicles for the n64!

I tried to do everything y'all critiqued me on before, like delivery and more talk of gameplay. Please, if you can spare the time, give it a watch and help me out again! What needs more work? Editing? Jokes? Delivery? Thanks Guys!! I'm actually trying to get better with these..promise!!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=U4eGTbgN0C0

Good job!

It explains what you need and it is on a game that I know nothing about. That's what kept me going.

The jokes are okay. They did the standard functions. I think some of the jokes may have a
bigger meaning for you, but I got the meaning of it.

I know you worked really hard this time around. Much better improvements.

+1

Good to hear!! Thank you so much for the feedback!! I'm still working out the kinks in my style and delivery.