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Super Mario Land

Posted: Mon Jun 25, 2012 11:40 am
by KDub
Hey I've put together a written review of Super Mario Land. Crazy right?

http://imretroactive.com/review-super-mario-land/

Re: Super Mario Land

Posted: Mon Jun 25, 2012 1:45 pm
by disorderlyvision
The content of the review was good, but there are some sentences you may want to fix up.

it will bounce all across the screen for a moments or until it hits an enemy.


The star gives makes you invincible


There may have been a couple others, but I am not a good grammar cop. Those two just stood out as I was reading, and kind of distracted from the content.

I always thought SML was a bit off from the usual Mario set up. I didn't know it had a different creator, so that explains a lot. SML is a decent game, but I enjoyed SML2 quite a bit more. It felt like more thought went into it. Did SML2 have the same creator as the first?

Re: Super Mario Land

Posted: Mon Jun 25, 2012 2:30 pm
by KDub
Thanks, fixed. Bound to miss a few.

Yes I believe Mario land 2 was headed by Yokoi again.

Re: Super Mario Land

Posted: Wed Jun 27, 2012 11:05 am
by dreamcast4ever83
I enjoyed your review and really loved that game i played it so much as a kid cause i hated tetrix which everyone else was going nutty over this game tho was the shit both one and 2


Thanks for the review! :D