Read Blake Snyder's book, "Save the Cat". Before you try making anything, you need a script. Before you can write a script, read "Save the Cat".
And work on your log line. You've told me about the ages and relationships in that description, but what is the conflict? Are the half-brothers radically different from the adults? Is the conflict over learning how to be a parent suddenly, or is there something more sinister following the boys into the household? You gotta spell it out and make it interesting if you want to excite potential investors with your pitch.
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Between the internet and cheap tech (cameras built into cell phones, even) there is no reason whatsoever for someone who wants to be making films to not be writing scripts and filming scenes. People who “want” to make films are the ones who do nothing but wait for their perfect film ideas to spring forth from the aether fully formed. Nothing happens, nothing moves forward, until you do things. Lots of great people getting famous on YouTube.
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Hell, even just doing skits for tiktok would still count as practice.
You were writing some king of the hill fanfics before right? How is that coming along. You're going to have to write TONS if you wanna get good at it.

You were writing some king of the hill fanfics before right? How is that coming along. You're going to have to write TONS if you wanna get good at it.
One advantage of racing thoughts from mental illness is having like 10 ideas for a video come to fruition even while just playing the gamemarurun wrote:People who “want” to make films are the ones who do nothing but wait for their perfect film ideas to spring forth from the aether fully formed. Nothing happens, nothing moves forward, until you do things. Lots of great people getting famous on YouTube.
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Read "Save the Cat" and then immediately flush it from your mind. Follow this by shredding the book (your workplace is legally mandated to allow you to destroy harmful non-fiction) then use the cuttings to form your sript. The industry term for this is a Kurtzman.
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Definitely made up for the lousy day I had at my morning job. Due to the volume of dirty dishes, not to mention my unwillingness to choose speed over overall cleanliness, I didn't get out of there until half past 1, an hour and a half after we closed.
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Well, now that it's the day after Thanksgiving, I decided it was time to start getting ready for the next major holiday: MLK Day. I went ahead and pulled out my boxes of MLK decorations and started playing a couple of my favorite MLK albums so I can bake the traditional holiday cookies, because you gotta go all out for Martin Luther King Jr Day! I start looking forward to this every year around this time, and man, I can't wait to spend time with family while honoring Dr. King. He truly is the reason for the season, after all.
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Happy to hear it! There have been a few nice restaurants there for a while, though!BoneSnapDeez wrote:Some nice looking restaurants finally arriving in Augusta. Awesome Asian Noodle place just opened this past week (the address of the place is -- and I'm not even trying to be funny here -- 1 Stephen King Drive). Love my noodles.
