To all the old school Sega fans

[hashiriya1]

I enjoyed reading your article, I got as far as part 2, I'll finish it later (I'm at work!). I don't mean to rain on your parade, but there are quite a few grammatical mistakes that slightly irked me. Be sure you clear that up if you decide to publish your work. Also, it comes off as if a teenager wrote it, but maybe you are a teenager...I don't know. Criticism is just part of the process. Good luck.

unstoppable rape machine: The Sony PlayStation.

I think you can come up with a better word than "rape".

[GSZX1337]

unstoppable rape machine: The Sony PlayStation.

I think you can come up with a better word than "rape".

"Unstoppable molestation machine"?